Line Graph
The line graphs illustrate the changing trends in the income of four cafes in New York over the last year.
Generally, there was an upward trend in income for Internet Express, Wifi Cafe and Cafe Cool, but downward for The Tea Room. The Tea Room earnings fluctuated wildly for the first nine months of the last year and then dropped significantly from nearly $140000 in October to $50000 in December.
On the contrary, Internet Express, Wifi Cafe, and Cafe Cool had an upward trend by different levels. Internet Express’s sales fell steadily for the first six months of the last year from $100000 to $80000 before having a sharp rise up to $130000. In addition, both Wifi Cafe and Cafe Cool’s income also ended the year up in December. Between January and July, Wifi Cafe doubled to $100000 and then soared to almost $1900000 in December. Likewise, Cafe Cool had a gradual rise for 11 months and then ended the year with a remarkable increase in its earnings.
It is noticeable that the income for the Tea Room is lower in the winter months than for the other three cafes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$140000'.
Suggestion: $140000
... then dropped significantly from nearly 140000$ in October to 50000$ in December. On ...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$50000'.
Suggestion: $50000
...antly from nearly 140000$ in October to 50000$ in December. On the contrary, Interne...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
... first six months of the last year from 100000$ to 80000$ before having a sharp rise up...
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Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$80000'.
Suggestion: $80000
...months of the last year from 100000$ to 80000$ before having a sharp rise up to 130000...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$130000'.
Suggestion: $130000
...80000$ before having a sharp rise up to 130000$. In addition, both Wifi Cafe and Cafe C...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
... January and July, Wifi Cafe doubled to 100000$ and then soared to almost 1900000$ in D...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1900000'.
Suggestion: $1900000
...ed to 100000$ and then soared to almost 1900000$ in December. Likewise, Cafe Cool had a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, so, then, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69473684211 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30910518578 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542105263158 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 23.461552473 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.1111111111 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 4.34317383033 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0513478490303 0.216113520407 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322578885956 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912390870908 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725802493401 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125712679483 0.0580467560999 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.