The line graph below in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012

The line graph delineates about countries like, Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica exported the quantity of coffee from 2002 to 2012.
Overall, it is explicitly observed that dramatic shot up was observed that a tremendous shot up was observed in the exported coffee by Brazil from initial year to ending whereas Colombia exported minimal amount of coffee in all among.
Now turning back to details, a moderate clime was manifested in Brazil around 129 (million) in the year 2002 thereafter in the year 2006, there had been a sharp up lift of around 5 (million) while in the year 2010 it goes down nearly 3 (million) and after that it move up word sharply and it become over 25 (million). Moreover, a sharp downfall was seen in Costa Rica between 2002 and 2006. there after it raised gradually until 2012 and get nearly 20 (million).
Moving further, in Colombia there was a drastic incline noticed from initial year to 2006 but there after a slight collapse accounted and it comprised to nearly 2 (million) in the year 2008, thereafter raised dramatically get around 15 (million) in the year 2012.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...ter that it move up word sharply and it become over 25 million. Moreover, a sharp dow...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecome over 25 million. Moreover, a sharp downfall was seen in Costa Rica between ...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...en in Costa Rica between 2002 and 2006. there after it raised gradually until 2012 a...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
...en in Costa Rica between 2002 and 2006. there after it raised gradually until 2012 and get...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...een 2002 and 2006. there after it raised gradually until 2012 and get nearly 20 m...
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Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
...e noticed from initial year to 2006 but there after a slight collapse accounted and it comp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74074074074 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40699455731 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534391534392 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.9541404254 43.030603864 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.333333333 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214556707596 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131228950249 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132425785362 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169650128984 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144989687959 0.0819641961636 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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