The given two maps below illusrate information about before and after the construction in the island for development of some tourist facilities.
Overall, it is explicitly observed that before any type of construction work been done on the island , there was only few palm trees but after that construction work for some tourist amenities completed the island is occupied with different infrastructures.
Now turning back to details, it can be easily be easily observed that before construction island have not any kind of tourist facility. However, after that the island goes under construction of nearly fifteen accomadation (huts)and around them foothpath was constructed.Although in the middle of the island there is an reception area built as well as near reception in the towards North of island a hefty resturant built while the vehicle is constructed around the reception.
Moving further, the range of island is 100 meters whereas at thr shore of island shaped pier is constructed for boating.Furthermore, at the wester shore of island where beach is located now turn into swimming arena.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...onstruction work been done on the island , there was only few palm trees but after...
^^
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'be easily'.
Suggestion: be easily
...s. Now turning back to details, it can be easily be easily observed that before construction islan...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...d around them foothpath was constructed.Although in the middle of the island there is an...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...gh in the middle of the island there is an reception area built as well as near re...
^^
Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
... shaped pier is constructed for boating.Furthermore, at the wester shore of island where be...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31034482759 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21819318049 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.9068755189 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.8 112.824112599 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2 5.23603664747 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288024868042 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171355469421 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102163812032 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19749058935 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102565392444 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.2329268293 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...onstruction work been done on the island , there was only few palm trees but after...
^^
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'be easily'.
Suggestion: be easily
...s. Now turning back to details, it can be easily be easily observed that before construction islan...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...d around them foothpath was constructed.Although in the middle of the island there is an...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...gh in the middle of the island there is an reception area built as well as near re...
^^
Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
... shaped pier is constructed for boating.Furthermore, at the wester shore of island where be...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31034482759 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21819318049 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.9068755189 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.8 112.824112599 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2 5.23603664747 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288024868042 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171355469421 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102163812032 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19749058935 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102565392444 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.2329268293 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.