The Bar graph elucidates the data regarding the count of visitors going to three different museums in London from June to September,2013.
Overall, it is found that there is irregular pattern of visitors to all the museums; However, Highest number of visitors are occupied British museum followed by it is National History museum where as least members visited to Science museum.In addition, There is a rapid rise in visitors of all museums during the August-September period.
British museum visitors count is 600 in June. It raised one-fourth by July and plummeted 40% by august.Later on increased to 700 by the next month. Considering the national history museum, In June there sight seer numbers are 550 . It got down to 390 by July and remained unchanged till August. Afterwards, there is slight growth in numbers reaching 490. On the other hand, Science museum travellers are 400 in June which uninterruptedly reduced by 25% ; Afterwards, Sky rocketed to 480 by September month.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...iod. British museum visitors count is 600 in June. It raised one-fourth by Ju...
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...isitors count is 600 in June. It raised one-fourth by July and plummeted 40% by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19375 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95465011864 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.4221939052 43.030603864 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 103.875 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311847642778 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124564634584 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971446188079 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22109916247 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526913126417 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.