The line graph illustrates how much profits four restaurants gained in 2010.
At first glance, it is noticeable that Delicacy, Evening Paradise and Grand Fiesta witnessed an upward trend in the figure of income while the figure for Spicy Fortune experienced a decline. In addition, Spicy Fortune ranked first in terms of profits in January but it was replaced by Evening Paradise in December.
The figures for Delicacy and Spicy Fortune restaurants both witnessed fluctuations in the first six months of the year. Starting at around 30,000 dollars in January, the income for Delicacy fluctuated around 30,000 dollars until June. After that, there was a gradual increase of 40,000 dollars in August before the figure dropped to 40,000 dollars in September. At this point, the income for this restaurant gradually rose to 80,000 dollars in November which was followed by a sharp increase of 60,000 dollars.This made Delicacy the restaurant earning the second highest amount of money. Regarding the Spicy Fortune restaurant, there was a fluctuation between 120,000 and 170,000 dollars in the first six months. Then, the figure witnessed a slight increase to 140,000 dollars from June to October before hitting the lowest point of 70,000 dollars. Starting with earning the highest income, Spicy Fortune ended up being the restaurant having the least earning.
There was an opposite trend in the figures of earnings from Evening Paradise and Grand Fiesta. From January to June, there was a gradual decrease of 20,000 dollars in the profits of Grand Fiesta while the figure for Evening Paradise witnessed a rapid rise of 40,000 dollars. After that, Grand Fiesta experienced a steady increase in profits, reaching a total of 140,000 dollars by the end of December. placing this restaurant at the second highest in terms of profits. This considerable upward trend pushed the restaurant to be the second largest profit earner in the list. Regarding Evening Paradise, the figure for this restaurant continuously rose to 100,000 dollars in July before hitting the lowest point at 60,000 dollars in September. This was followed by a sharp increase of 110,000 dollars in the figure, making this restaurant gaining the least income.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, regarding, second, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 33.7804878049 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 965.302439024 194% => OK
No of words: 356.0 196.424390244 181% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25842696629 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56490054558 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418539325843 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 283.868780488 194% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3714455747 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.117647059 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0841192063263 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424421277157 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725831969236 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108044808271 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120393405394 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.