Presented the table illustrating the proportion of electrical equipment used in New Zealand families in two given years (2002 and 2020).
Overall, it is transparent from the chart that high-tech devices were consumed higher than during the research time-scale. It is also noticeable that while most electronic goods witnessed an upward trend, the opposite was true for the video recorder.
Newzealand households bought the washing machine estimate 97% of households in 2002. The figure was significantly higher than the equivalent figures for color TV and dishwasher at 95% and 45%, respectively. After that, both the three items witnessed an increase in the basic need to use with the most notable rise dedicated to dishwasher accounted for 10% compared to other things (washing machine, color TVs). It was only small grown, ranging from 98% to 99%.
Next, we can see that computers, cell phones, the digital camera were using more and more in 2020 because our lives have been developing daily. Video recorder had a considerable decrease from 75% (2002) to 60% (2020); meanwhile, a reverse pattern was detached in terms of the figures for computer, cellphone, digital camera, which accompanied an increase of 18 percent and 60 percent, 38 percent in order. There was the digital camera was grow the fastest in comparison with the two other items.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... on daily basic. Video recorder was had an considerable decrease from 75% 2002 to ...
^^
Line 4, column 391, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...an increase of 18 percent and 60 percent , 38 percent in order. There was digital ...
^^
Line 4, column 444, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
... in order. There was digital camera was grow the fastest in comparison with the two ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03524229075 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58783452018 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656387665198 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6169204315 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0641901651439 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282811779322 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216633926714 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0408377707015 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138031475681 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.