Big cities are facing with population increase today. There are some significant reasons why big cities' population growth is increasing. The first and the most important cause is employment opportunities. It is easy to find a job in the big city because There are lots of companies, stores, industries and stuff like that; As a result, individuals would rather go to big cities for job openings. The second cause, big cities have better infrastructure than other areas(like education, good Medical Facilities, so on); hence, It is obvious that people want to live in the city and leads to a population explosion. the next reason is the lack of family planning; accordingly, they are uncontrolled over their's children plan. In conclusion, there are plenty of advantages to living in big cities. A metropolis has employment and good infrastructure, all of which make life easier and attract people's attention. After all, who wouldn't want to live in a metropolis?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...re are some significant reasons why big cities population growth is increasing. The fi...
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Line 1, column 612, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ty and leads to a population explosion. the next reason is the lack of family plann...
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Line 1, column 922, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...tract peoples attention. After all, who wouldnt want to live in a metropolis?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, hence, if, second, so, after all, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12101910828 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05903614526 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662420382166 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.6718782213 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328907699762 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120465820054 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946101195479 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328907699762 0.151304729494 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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