The line graph below shows the monthly ridership of four separate transportation forms in a European metropolitan area between 1980 and 2030 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant

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The line graph below shows the monthly ridership of four separate transportation forms in a European metropolitan area between 1980 and 2030.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.

The given line graph illustrates how many passengers who use four differents public transportation per month in a European urban area since 1980, and forecast trends tip until 2030.
What stands out from the line graph is that while the number of Bus declined, others transport had a upward trends. In addition, Bike Share has only been used since 2000.
In 1980, starting at a quite high point, Subway ranked the first compares to other transportations with 2.5 millions users and then, it saw a prediction that it will surge to 4.5 millions in 2030. On the other hand, the number of Bus is estimated to tumble by around 0.8 millions at the same of the period.
Besides, Tram just has less than 0.5 millions in 1980 before it witnessing a growth to overtook Bus and then, it is expected that it will plunge to 2 millions at the end of the period. Until 2000, people who use Bike Share were and will be evaluated to slight increase in 2030, about 0.3 and more than 0.5 respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
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...r of Bus declined, others transport had a upward trends. In addition, Bike Share ...
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...ations with 2.5 millions users and then, it saw a prediction that it will surge t...
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....5 millions in 1980 before it witnessing a growth to overtook Bus and then, it i...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...fore it witnessing a growth to overtook Bus and then, it is expected that it wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, then, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57062146893 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50650148899 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9012589839 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13386356398 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585812544825 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707136417337 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902577646819 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739126846843 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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