The line graph below shows the percantage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.
Summarise the information by selactig and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the proportion of visitors to England who went to four
different tourist attractions in Brighton between 1980 and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage visiting the Pier and the Pavilion
increased over the period, while the proportion of visitors to the other
attractions fell.
In 1980, only 10% of tourists to England went to Brighton Pier. Despite some
minor fluctuations, this figure rose from about 12% in 2000 to 22% in 2010.
The percentage visiting the Pavilion also increased,from 23% in 1980 to almost
50% in 1995.However, this figure then declined, to 35% in 2000 and then to
about 30% in 2010, slightly higher than the Festival.
The most popular Brighton attraction in 1980 for visitors to England was the
Festival. Although 30% of these attended the Festival in 1980, by 2010 this
percentage had fallen slightly to 28%.In 1980, the figure for visitors to the Art
Gallery was 21%. It rose to a peakof 38%, but this then decreased dramatically
to less than 10% in 2010. It was, therefore, the least popular of the attractions at
the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01069518717 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76261052798 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51871657754 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
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Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1344918686 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.111111111 112.824112599 92% => OK
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Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
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Language errors: 99.0 1.69756097561 5832% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130368600796 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707209536578 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864011720786 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050757496894 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656529557879 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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