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it can be clearly seen that count of queries received through letter follows the little bit variations between january to march. Moreover, in january the sum of queries received through telephone was almost doubled as compared to queries received in person. besides this, queries received through graph-below-shows-the-number-of-inquiries-received-by-the-tourist-information-office/" target="_top" style="color: rgb(10, 137, 192);">telephone reached 1000 in march and remain the same till april. while the number of requests in person increased to 800.
Moving further, it is evident from the graph that in april queries received through emails recorded as half of the queries received in person that was 600 and in may it decreased to around 400 and followed the same trend up to the month of june. while in may sum of queries received through telephone and in-person was around 1400 and 1600 respectively. As well as in june personally collected requests reached its peek point that was approximately 1900 and queries received by telephone increased by 200 which was 1400.
it can be concluded that the number of requests in person showed a steady but significant rise over the period while the sum of queries by letter experienced a downward trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ies received through letter follows the little bit variations between january to march. Mo...
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Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...compared to queries received in person. besides this, queries received through graph-be...
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Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...n march and remain the same till april. while the number of requests in person increa...
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Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n march and remain the same till april. while the number of requests in person increa...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...the same trend up to the month of june. while in may sum of queries received through ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...phone increased by 200 which was 1400. it can be concluded that the number of req...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77314814815 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.81874980747 2.65546596893 257% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523148148148 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.5694576127 43.030603864 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.875 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253891250293 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103398171598 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840060535752 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161185426483 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110217844433 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.