The line graph shows the data about export of cloth by three countries.
The line graph illustrates the data about clothing exports by three countries Colombia, Japan and Myanmar from 1999 to 2003. The unit of measurement was millions of dollars.
Overall, the export rate for Myanmar was appreciably increased as compared to Colombia and Japan but remained lower as opposed to both countries at the end of the period.
In 1999, the export of Colombia and Japan was 580 and 450 millions of dollars respectively, whereas the figure for Myanmar was a mere 10 millions of dollars. However, the reverse had been noticed in 2000 that the figure for Myanmar dramatically reached up to 800 million dollars as opposed to Colombia's and Japan's remained the same on almost 520 million dollars. Again, Myanmar's figure climbed at a peak of 950 million dollars in comparison with others which reported moderate growth in the figure accounted for 600 million dollars for Japan and 650 million dollars for Colombia.
In 2002, Myanmar's export was drastically slipped at 350 million dollar growth, on the other hand, 50 millions of dollars' growth were observed in case of Colombia's which also remained higher as compare to others in 2003 with a drop of 100 millions of dollars in the last figure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...o Colombia and Japan but remained lower as opposed to both countries at the end of...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '450 million'.
Suggestion: 450 million
...xport of Colombia and Japan was 580 and 450 millions of dollars respectively, whereas the figur...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '10 million'.
Suggestion: 10 million
...ereas the figure for Myanmar was a mere 10 millions of dollars. However, the reverse had been ...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '50 million'.
Suggestion: 50 million
...llion dollar growth, on the other hand, 50 millions of dollars growth were observed in case of...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...of Colombias which also remained higher as compare to others in 2003 with a drop o...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '100 million'.
Suggestion: 100 million
...ompare to others in 2003 with a drop of 100 millions of dollars in the last figure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98522167488 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55567717845 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527093596059 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4905889131 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.571428571 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0962386796506 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077763148743 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149983642537 0.0843802449381 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111870688737 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149373700205 0.0819641961636 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.