Some people think that developed countries have higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is argued by some people that the preservation of Environment is the prime duty of developed nations while others believe that it is impossible to protect the globe without the support of every country. However, I also agree that it should be individuals responsibility but developed countries must take initiative and assist economically to underdeveloped countries for that.
On the one hand, the major environmental issues such as global warming and Ozone layer depletion can significantly affect the whole world by increasing the overall temperature of the earth which results into rising the sea level. In other words, it is being said that developed nations are more answerable for those serious problems because most of the part of the earth is overwhelmingly utilized by them for their business purpose. For example, the US, China and India, they are the highest manufacturer of industrial items as well as user of fuel in the automobile sector. Hence, they are the major problem creator and it is their fundamental duty to allot funds for the conservation of the globe. I first met her in Paris where I lived as a small child.
On the other hand, The threats such as air and water pollution in any region are liability of that provenance individually because only they can evaluate the main causes behind those in their territory and can find the appropriate solutions. Besides, countries can also generate electricity through renewable energy sources of their region to control the pollution caused by the thermal power plants. Moreover, problems like traffic congestion and solid waste handling which are also emerging as dangerous problems to the atmosphere of the locality which can only be resolved by the local authorities. After she picks me up, mum is taking me to buy shoes.
In conclusion, I believe that with the support of organizations such as the United Nations and developed countries, all the nations should commit to secure the environment and world by focusing on this life threatening issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 965.302439024 176% => OK
No of words: 332.0 196.424390244 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12951807229 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88769036167 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 106.607317073 178% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 283.868780488 192% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9555279601 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.916666667 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148540516392 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497856683674 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666335417484 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109024015961 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957230889927 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 40.7170731707 223% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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