The line graphs below provides information about the bananas cost in US dollar per KG in 4 different countries(Japan, France, Germany and USA) between 1996 and 2004.
Looking from overall perspective, it is readily apparent that banana price in US dollars per KG in Japan was very high. While, USA maintained banana cost remained steady throughout the entire period in comparison to among other countries. Although, banana price fluctuated in Japan, France and Germany countries.
At the beginning of period, Banana price were at $2 per kg in both Japan and France countries. However, Cost in Japan increased drastically reaching around $3 in 1998 and hitting high point. whereas, selling cost of banana remained study till 1998 in France and declined to 1.5 dollar in 1999 and after that, banana price fluctuated in both countries. 2.5 and 2 dollars were banana prices respectively, at the end of period.
Banana rate in Germany was high compared to USA in 1996 and figures for price at 1.5 and 1 dollar correspondingly. Although, after having banana price ups and downs till 1999 then price increased significantly and reached $2 in 2002 and ended with around $1.75 price. On the other hand, apart from slight growth in 1998 of price approximately $0.25 in comparison to $1 with previous year, it remained steady over an 8 years period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
The line graph below provides information about the ba...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... dollars per KG in Japan was very high. While, USA maintained banana cost remained st...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...ginning of period, Banana price were at 2$ per kg in both Japan and France countri...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$3'.
Suggestion: $3
...n increased drastically reaching around 3$ in 1998 and hitting high point. whereas...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...ound 3$ in 1998 and hitting high point. whereas, selling cost of banana remained study ...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$5'.
Suggestion: $5
...y till 1998 in France and declined to 1.5$ dollar in 1999 and after that, banana p...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rate in Germany was high compared to USA in 1996 and figures for price at 1.5 and...
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Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...ice increased significantly and reached 2$ in 2002 and ended with around 1.75$ pri...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$75'.
Suggestion: $75
...ched 2$ in 2002 and ended with around 1.75$ price. On the other hand, apart from sl...
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Line 7, column 347, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25'.
Suggestion: $25
...growth in 1998 of price approximately 0.25$ in comparison to 1$ with previous year,...
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Line 7, column 368, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1'.
Suggestion: $1
...ce approximately 0.25$ in comparison to 1$ with previous year, it remained steady ...
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Line 7, column 415, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... previous year, it remained steady Over a 8 years period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, whereas, while, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03139013453 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75850734023 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538116591928 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.13358886 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152055758247 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068412014398 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543057614624 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117882541675 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600784100991 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.