The line graph shows the number of bananas imported to 4 countries from 1996 to 2004

The line graphs below provides information about the bananas cost in US dollar per KG in 4 different countries(Japan, France, Germany and USA) between 1996 and 2004.

Looking from overall perspective, it is readily apparent that banana price in US dollars per KG in Japan was very high. While, USA maintained banana cost remained steady. Banana prices fluctuated in Japan, France and Germany countries throughout the period.

At the beginning of period, banana price was at $2 per kg in both Japan and France countries. However, cost in Japan increased drastically to $3 in 1998. Whereas, selling cost of banana remained study till 1998 in France and declined to 1.5 dollar in 1999 and after that, banana price fluctuated in both countries. 2.5 and 2 dollars were banana prices respectively, at the end of period.

Banana rate in Germany was high compared to USA in 1996 and figures for price at 1.5 and 1 dollar correspondingly. After that banana price was in ups and downs till 1999 and then significantly increased to $2 in 2002, ended up about $1.75 price. On the other hand, apart from slight growth in 1998 of price approximately $0.25, In comparison to $1 with previous year, it remained steady over an 8 years period.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...beginning of period, banana price was at per kg in both Japan and France countrie...
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..., cost in Japan increased drastically to in 1998. Whereas, selling cost of banana...
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...1999 and then significantly increased to in 2002, ended up about .75 price. On th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, whereas, while, apart from, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94634146341 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76601281428 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4817668976 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1818181818 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176205094029 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757765457283 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553110842194 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130379723714 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582967016695 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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