The line graph compares the price of bananas imported to 4 countries between 1996 and 2004.
Overall, the price of bananas imported to Japan was the highest whereas the least price was in the USA. But the price of bananas imported to Germany, which changes dramatically.
In 1996, the cost of bananas imported to Germany was recorded 1.5USD/kg then increased dramatically to below 2USD/kg in 2004, despite of declining slightly in 1999. Similarly, the cost of bananas imported to the USA was 1USD/kg then the figure reached a plateau at above 1USD/kg in 2004.
By contrast, the bananas was imported at the similar cost in Japan and France amounting to 2USD/kg in 1996. But the price of bananas imported to Japan reached to 3USD/kg in 1998 before fluctuating in a decrease trend from 1999 to 2003. Subsequently, this figure grew at sharply 2,5USD/kg in 2004. In terms of the price of bananas imported to France, which remained constant at 2USD/kg, in spite of dropping in 1999 and 2002 ( 1,5 USD/kg and nearly 2USD/kg respectively).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 424, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g, in spite of dropping in 1999 and 2002 1,5 USD/kg and nearly 2USD/kg respective...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, similarly, then, whereas, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98850574713 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63719845586 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.388147559 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4444444444 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287936032018 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162056684784 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138867331591 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249392350396 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169241235768 0.0819641961636 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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