The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The given line graph manifest the passengers at Paris Metro station. The data has been calibrated in numbers.

To begin with, at 6:00 am there are only 100 travellers. However, there had been a massive increase noticed at Paris metro station as at 8:00 am the passengers are at peak the number comprised to 400. Nevertheless, there is a steady decline observed in the number of passengers at 10:30 am it stood at 200. Moving further, there was a static number seen from 12:30 pm to 14:30 pm passenger's rush remain unchanged. Analyzing further, again the rush of travelers decreases to 100 at 4:30 pm. Although. There is a dramatic rise observed at 19:00 am as now passengers are coming back to their hometown from offices, the number rise to 400. However, after that, it keeps falling in the night hours and stood at a hundred.

To cap it all, it can be vividly seen that in morning hours there are a lot of rush and in the afternoon it becomes steady again at 8,o clock in a night it increased.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... travelers decreases to 100 at 4:30 pm. Although. There is a dramatic rise observed at 1...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 637, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...n from offices, the number rise to 400. However after that, it keeps falling in night h...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...eps falling in night hours and stood at hundred. To cap it all, it can be vividly se...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55865921788 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5199927771 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553072625698 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1102288411 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976243942014 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527260042144 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977439416929 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105192165894 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109310469972 0.0819641961636 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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