The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph compares past changes and future predictions of the New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050.
Overall, people aged 65 and over accounted for the highest percentage of the New Zealand population throughout the period, including the predicted future figures.
In 1950, the proportion of the elderly people ranked first the list with 60%, followed by that of people aged 38 to 45 at around 25%. In the next 40 years, while senior citizens witnessed a mild increase in population growth to 70%, the figure for people aged 14 and under decreased gradually from 5% to almost 1 %. In contrast, the percentage of people aged 38 to 45 rose dramatically to 50% then fail to 40% and unchanged after 20 years. A fluctuation of the data of people aged 25 to 37 was experienced which varied from 20% to 10%.
In 2020, while the younger age group are predicted to rise slightly in population growth, the proportion of people aged 38 to 45 remains stable and growth insignificantly in 2050. The figure for people aged over 65 and that of people aged 25 to 27 have the same downward trend which decline to 55% and 1% respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...reased gradually from 5% to almost 1 %. In contrast, the percentage of people aged...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68844221106 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70587786125 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552763819095 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7423834788 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.625 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131910657905 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803016115046 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101887460308 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135661179337 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120066424366 0.0819641961636 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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