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Regarding to the 0-14 age group, the rate of people aged 0 to 14 stood at 5% in 1950, which was four times as low as that of the 38-to 45-year-olds. In the 40 following years, this figure hit a trough at about 2%, followed by an anticipation of experiencing a considerable growth to 20% at the end of the period. Meanwhile, the data for people between 38 and 45 years old reached a peak of approximately 50% in 1990. However, this figure is estimated to drop to 40% in 2050.
Turning to the 25-37 age group, starting at 20% in 1950, the statistic for this age bracket exhibited an fluctuation and then stood at the same number of the initial year in 1990. Then, it is expected to hit the lowest value on record of 0% in 2050. During this timeframe, the percentage of people over 65 was the highest over the chart, but it is anticipated to decline significantly in 2050 despite witnessed to have an increase to 70% in 1990
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...tatistic for this age bracket exhibited an fluctuation and then stood at the same ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54583333333 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72488213303 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9894173024 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.1 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193480189277 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811210851477 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120891983754 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15794619316 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156341852061 0.0819641961636 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.