The line graph illustrates the number of visits abroad by UK residents and visits to the UK by overseas residents over the period of 1979 to 1999 and the bar chart displays the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. It is clear evident that France and Spain has visited UK the most.
To begin, with the line graph in 1979 visits abroad by UK residents and visits to the UK by overseas residents at starting are almost at same ratio about 10 million visits to the UK by overseas residents and whereas 12 million UK residents visited abroad. While in 1984 visits by UK residents has reached almost 20 million and whereas the visits by overseas residents has only reach the 13 million which is comparatively low in terms on visits in 1994 to 1999 which as ratio about 25 to 30 million and visits abroad by UK residents has reach the highest visit abroad by UK residents in 1994 to 1999 about 45 to 55 million.
In the bar chart most popular countries visited by UK residents are France and Spain, where France has a little higher age in terms of visits around more than 11 million of UK visitors and for Spain it is about 9 million, which comparatively higher than other countries like USA, Greece and Turkey rated as 4, 3 and 2 million per year. It is clear evident that France and Spain are the top two destinations for UK residents in the period of 1979 to 1999.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'reached'.
Suggestion: reached
...e visits by overseas residents has only reach the 13 million which is comparatively l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4431372549 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4070126945 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.388235294118 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.687304524 43.030603864 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.833333333 112.824112599 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.5 22.9334400587 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381688010234 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250680348895 0.103423049105 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112319805852 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324933303763 0.15604864568 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10790865974 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.23 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.3012195122 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.36 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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