The line graph given below compares the number of cars stolen in four European countries from 1990 to 1999.
Overall,the cartheft in Great Britain surpassed the theft of all the other countries in the initial periods.Also,although Great Britain had higher thefts it experienced a decreasing trend whereas Canada had an increasing trend within the time frame.
To begin with,in 1990,the number of car thefts in Great Britain and Sweaden were approximately 18,000 and slightly abve 5000 respectively.However,Great Britain showed an erratic pattern in the next 8 years and gradually decreased to
about 17,000 thefts in1999.In contrast,Swedens rate slowly climbed to almost 13,000 over 6 years ,but plateaued between 1996 and 1998.By 1991,number of car stolen had an upward growth just below 15,000.
Moreover,both France and Canada showed a similar pattern in thefts.The figure began with around 10,000 car stolen in both the countries and then started to drop slightly,but in the case of France thefts increased very slowly over the period,it declined further to approximately 6000 in 1999.Canada remained with similar and steady pattern until late 1999.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, then, whereas, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57627118644 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33467367479 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.45849505 43.030603864 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 246.75 112.824112599 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.25 22.9334400587 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.75 5.23603664747 358% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139810887065 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1076124174 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807417647523 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927493943413 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780188190691 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.0 13.2329268293 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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