Many jobs in the home nowadays can be done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
In today’s modern world, with the advent of new machines, the amount of energy invested by humans in performing various household works has been reduced to a large extent. This advancement has nearly replaced manual power required to achieve certain tasks in our day to day life. This essay will focus on both benefits and drawbacks of this change.
To begin with, engineers invented different kinds of machines that assists people to do different household activities. Firstly, the invention of these machines helps the most valuable thing, that is time from being wasted. Let us consider the most important inventions like washing machines and vaccum cleaners. Today, almost all every house is equipped with these electrical appliances. For instance, the process of washing clothes often involves many tedious tasks such as washing, drying and ironing and without this cloth washer this process usually takes one to two hours. Also, even dusting process is made easier with this machine saving time. Secondly, another major advantage is these machines often produce accurate and correct results when compared to erroneous outcomes produced by manual jobs. Finally, they also help us in not wasting our energy and strain too much for this everyday tasks.
However, though these machines made our lives easier and smoother there are few disadvantages of using them. One of the major drawback is these kind of inventions which doesn’t require manual effort makes people lazy. People are becoming more and more dependent on them even for simple jobs. In addition to this, these equipments are usually expensive and only few sections of societies can afford to buy them.
To sum up, I believe the benefits of these machines outweigh the disadvantages. As we all know necessity is the mother of invention, these machines are invented considering the basic needs of the people so that they can save their time and energy as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 965.302439024 169% => OK
No of words: 313.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21086261981 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49772017842 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 106.607317073 182% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619808306709 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 283.868780488 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7963034387 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9411764706 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113427338165 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352563537532 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295054997583 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653647166634 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247451460273 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 40.7170731707 209% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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