In many parts of the world, children's lives were very different from today.
What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of life for children in the past?
Nowadays, The material lives of children are improved than in the past. Whether or not children's lives in the past were disadvantages?
I believe that children get three main benefits. Firstly, They spent their free time playing outside with other children who lived nearby, because their families didn't have a TV, computer or mobile phone. However, Their parents had to work from morning to night to make money, the children knew how to take care of themselves early when alone. And finally, they didn't feel so stressed about tasks in school, so they got an awesome childhood.
Besides those benefits, There have some disadvantages that focus on material life. They had to walk along with home to school because their parents worked early and they didn't have their own vehicle. They also were restricted by learning conditions such as learning tools and materials, so the children difficult to access education. Moreover, they worked to help parents make more money. However, they had much time playing outside, they faced dangerous when they acted like climbing or swimming in rivers.
All in all, I see that children's lives in the modern world have more advantages. They can easily access anything they want because the material lives are much more improved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08173076923 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39833502867 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620192307692 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5997785595 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3076923077 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172198949859 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910511562532 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111496727673 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15569642399 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12012898187 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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