Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The use of media has become narrowed to one singular topic, celebrities.Nowadays,individuals, read magazines, papers or even watch tv on the hope of hitting upon some satisfying news for him or for her.Unfortunately, this may not seem so bad, for some, but it ,certainly, is for others.As a matter of fact, Media coverage of celebrities can affect our children negatively

First, children will learn to look into others' privacy. With the media not respecting stars' private life, children will learn to do the same. To explain more, Children are not mature enough to differentiate between what is good and what is bad. Instead all they know is that they've seen this happen so many times.

Second, the Media conveys unrealistic images about fame. When a certain story about some star is covered, You will find that it is perfect and flawless. Children ,however, will believe everything they hear even if the story was enhanced or made up, and that in fact could lead them to be mislead.

Indeed, the use of the media must be limited to a certain amount of times, so our children wont get effected by it.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Instead,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, in fact, as a matter of fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84736842105 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26557211203 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668421052632 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.001576195 43.030603864 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.125 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231209743168 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880966759002 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406977593891 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119975756145 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446436420015 0.0819641961636 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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