Many people think that museums and galleries should only show work from local artists rather than work from other countries. Do you agree?
Some people claim that work from local artists should be displayed at museums and galleries more instead of national works. Despite the benefits of this view, I believe it can have consequences in the process of cultural integration and development.
Those who agree with the view that government should only show work from regional artists consider it a good way to support the development of artistic value in their country. Moreover, only displaying native paintings can spread folk art to teenage, which leads to the youth in the present time having a passion for folk paintings and being conscious of preserving and developing them. However, limiting shows to only local artists’ work results in the audiences can feel bored and having few chances to approach the world art scene.
On the other hand, the opponents think that only showing local artwork can limit the opportunity to experience and discover foreign’s cultures. For example, some countries such as Korea, Japan, and China often held cultural fairs to show their culture, and artworks from their countries are one of them. Besides that, a national exhibition also promotes tourism development by attracting more native and international tourists.
In conclusion, although prioritizing local artwork can increase the creativity of the artists and enhance the value of the country's art, the balance between showing both local and national artworks can bring more benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35087719298 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69279672484 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7530973839 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.555555556 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 5.23603664747 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316281258217 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127596546473 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109367894317 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181634569104 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548831491988 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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