The picture illustrate the modification of scenery in the village of Ryemouth between two separate years.
Overall, the entire area in the village was renovated. If the main road divides the village into two halves, the west side of the village has more changes than the east side.
In 1995, there was a big farmland in the northeast of the village, but util now it convert into a golf and tennis areas. Besides that the forest park next to the farmland has been demolished. In the southeast of the village there were a hotel and car park. Come to present, although the hotel stay the same as in 1995, the car park was
knocked down. On the other side of the main street, the cafe by the sea was also unchanged like the hotel.
In the western half of the village there were more changes. The fishing port has been pulled down and the apartments occupy the fish market. In the other side of main street, the shop no longer there because human construct in that side the restaurant. The northwest side of the village was also changed but relatively little. Besides building more houses on both sides of the main road and opening additional secondary roads from the main road through the row of houses, there is nothing special.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sea was also unchanged like the hotel. In the western half of the village there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59090909091 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26067714569 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9089137102 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6923076923 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129120898287 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481048528381 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319325882786 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782462558797 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306953058096 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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