The map below is of the wtown of Garlston. A new supermarket (S) is Planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket.
The town of Garston map gives information about two possible location of new Supermarket which will be planned to build in the town.
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Overall, the first possible location for supermarket located on the countryside and the second possible location located in the Town Center with no traffic zone.
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The first possible location is really close to the main road and the railway, in the north side and the south side of the new supermarket respectively. Both railway and main road are direct access to Hindon which have 10,000 populations and located 12 km in Northwest from Garlston.
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The second possible location of supermarket where located in the middle of Garldon who have 65,000 populations, has easy access to Branston and Cranston, where located 16 km in the southwest and 25 km in the south east respectively. The population of Branston is 15,000 and Cranston is 29,000. The second possible places is also near of the housing and South Industry area.
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| 2017-03-12 | hasanadjieb | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re located 16 km in the southwest and 25 km in the south east respectively. The p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, really, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16564417178 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84568685595 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509202453988 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0330658736 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212293839658 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10151454585 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987327492913 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156273951125 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955695675548 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.