The map illustrates the changes that have occured in Templeton, a sidesea resort, over a 10 a year period beginning in 1990 and ending in 2005.
The changes over 10 years of a coast resort, Templeton, from 1990 to 2005 are showed in the map. Overall, there are extensive developments with regards to construction of buildings and facilities by cut down the trees.
Transport system has significant changes in Templeton. A seaport has been built on south-east side of the town that passed through by railway. This railway continues along the beach and cross the river over a new bridge. Meanwhile, in the north part beside the river, an airport was constructed.
There is building has built for industrial purpose such as a factory on the west side of the railway station. Another building for commercial purpose is supermarket put up along the new road on the west side of the town.
The residential also has a lot changes, showed by condo was replaced house along the beach and lake, and there are some new house opposite the supermarket and hospital.
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- Many museums charge for admission ehile others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweighvthe advantages? 56
- The diagram shows production of sugar by a German company for supermarkets and restaurants 61
- The map illustrates the changes that have occured in Templeton a sidesea resort over a 10 a year period beginning in 1990 and ending in 2005 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'houses'?
Suggestion: houses
... beach and lake, and there are some new house opposite the supermarket and hospital.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89677419355 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69882619878 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606451612903 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1808741632 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146344632076 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733030717543 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152070233233 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942732098134 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128068565776 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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