The maps below changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant
The given maps compare a Spanish city namely Castellon between 2000 and today.
Overall, it is clear that Castellon witnesses a remarkable transformation, noticeably with shopping and transport facilities.
Looking at the map for more data, the university on the top is the only building in Castellon that has not changed over time while the forrest nearby has been chopped down in order to make way for a new shopping centre. To the east , an airport is underconstruction and a new covered market appear. Meanwhile, a train station and an old market converted into police station and new shop respectively in the other side of the map.
In 2000, there was not any accommodation for students, but a hall of residence has been erected on the top left-hand corner. In the port area, the road has been pedestrianized and a range of entertainment facilities have been built such as cinemas, bars and club. The final alteration that happened is the introduction of the tramline from city centre going through a new train station to the university
- The pictures below show how tea is produced They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea 78
- The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000 73
- The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007 78
- The first chart shows the population of England and wales between 1700 and 200 The second chart gives information about the birth and death rate in the same countries in the same period 67
- The given table illustrates the entire value while the pie charts describe the percentage of fish that the United States bought from three different areas in 1988 1992 and 2000 Overall it can easily be seen that the US spent more and more money buying fis 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93181818182 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00471503244 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630681818182 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1170205025 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134792297959 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057238281453 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769970891203 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960763150255 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846765588189 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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