The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 and 2012

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The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 and 2012

The map illustrates the transformation that have occurred in Frenton, over 20 year period starting from 1990 to 2012. The most obvious transformation is the replacement of the green area with technopark and residential building in the southwest side of the town and residential building in north side.

To begin with, there have been several major changes in the building usage in the town. Some building such as houses, café and park, theatre, and shops in the right side or in the east of the town have been turned into blocks of flats, hotel and golf course, cinema, and supermarket. A new flat also has been built in north east across high street.

Moreover the hospitality by the street has been transformed into bigger one. In the other hand, the bank in front of school in the north west of the map vanished, turned into restaurant with bigger building. Beside that changed, the school building remains the same.

Another landscape stay untouched was the high street, which is stay straight from north east towards south west, dividing the city into two area.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...lt in north east across high street. Moreover the hospitality by the street has been ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'stays'.
Suggestion: stays
... remains the same. Another landscape stay untouched was the high street, which is...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91758241758 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51259957486 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6328551411 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4444444444 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126075854068 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567277623581 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113565640057 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737879766862 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764378959425 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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