The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Submitted by nirajp989 on Thu, 08/19/2021 - 04:26

The layout of a bookstore has been changed a lot between 20 years period is depicted by the rendered map.
In 2000, the left side of the main entrance, there was a two fiction department where second one was alongside with first department. In front of the entrance, travel and new book section was situated and also behind of those, there was art,hobbies and cookery section were paralleled constructed. The right side of the entrance two department was positioned as namely service desk and nonfiction area.
After 21 years, the North side of the bookstore, fiction department has become smaller and art,hobbies in cookery section have also moved there. Besides, non-fiction area is reconstructed at the former place of second fiction area.The cafe is erected at the former place of the non-fiction section and also tables are designed at the centre of the store. Travel, new books and service desk are remained unchanged throughout the span.
Overall, some of the section of a bookstore is the same but two things have been added and other are modified and the functionality of the book store has improved.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hobbies
... and also behind of those, there was art,hobbies and cookery section were paralleled con...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hobbies
...on department has become smaller and art,hobbies in cookery section have also moved ther...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...the former place of second fiction area.The cafe is erected at the former place of ...
^^^
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...nchanged throughout the span. Overall, some of the section of a bookstore is the same but ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 3.97073170732 453% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98387096774 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69663720905 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0414443252 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.875 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0513039590958 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258275654652 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370784430555 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.039239378084 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282128370535 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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