The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Submitted by nirajp989 on Thu, 08/19/2021 - 03:30

The maps demonstrate a situation of bookstore between 2000 and now.
Overall, the total area of the bookstore is same, but various things have been changed and added.
In 2008, the bookstore was fairly simple with many subdivision. The entrance was placed in the west side of bookstore and near the entrance there was a service desk on the southeast side a corner. south of the the art, hobbies and cookery book stands was a non-fiction book stand. Travel and new books were placed between entrance and art book stand and an 'L' shape of friction section was in the North side of bookstore.
After 21 years later, entrance, travel, new books section and service desk are still remained unchanged. Apart from it, hobbies and cookery book sections have been shifted into friction section and friction stand has been comprised and placed between crockery and a new non-fiction book stand. Old non-fiction section has been converted into cafe and three tables also added in the centre of the bookstore.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun subdivision seems to be countable; consider using: 'many subdivisions'.
Suggestion: many subdivisions
...8, the bookstore was fairly simple with many subdivision. The entrance was placed in the west si...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: South
...ce desk on the southeast side a corner. south of the the art, hobbies and cookery boo...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...n the southeast side a corner. south of the the art, hobbies and cookery book stands wa...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...n the southeast side a corner. south of the the art, hobbies and cookery book stands wa...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91715976331 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44662929111 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532544378698 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1217549606 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0542161416923 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396565411733 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073524398482 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764914387621 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096154634393 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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