The information about the wages of secondary/high school tutors in 2009 is demonstrated by the render table chart. The data has been calibrated in thousand of dollars.
In Luxembourg, teachers who were join school their starting salaries was the highest than others nation's teacher, it account for 80000. After 15 years later that was reached at 119000. Apart from it, during 30 years Luxembourg teachers maximum wages was 132000. In Japan and Korea, starting salaries of high school teachers was 34000 and 30000 respectively. Maximum wages of Japanis and Korean secondary school teachers was 86000 reach meanwhile 37 years and 62000 at 34 years.
Moving further, Australian tutors starting wages was the least as compare to other countries, which was 28000 and the maximum salaries was almost doubled during next 9 year period. Referring to Denmark teachers, starting salaries was almost doubled then Australia, whereas the difference of maximum salary is was only 6000 with 1 year.
Overall, it can be vividly manifested that Japanese teacher was getting maximum salary with 37 years period. Nevertheless, Denmark was the least.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'joined'.
Suggestion: joined
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Message: Did you mean 'accounts'?
Suggestion: accounts
...highest than others nations teacher, it account for 80000. After 15 years later that wa...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... nations teacher, it account for 80000. After 15 years later that was reached at 1190...
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Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...hereas the difference of maximum salary is was only 6000 with 1 year. Overall, it...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...eas the difference of maximum salary is was only 6000 with 1 year. Overall, it can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, second, then, whereas, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33519553073 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61678029084 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631284916201 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5271360217 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8181818182 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149487186332 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724342183145 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758213012227 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109489331283 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066062662152 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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