The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now , and plans for it's development.
The given maps illustrate cuanges which will take place in small town called Islip
Overall , Islip town is going to witness dramatic changes including in road construction and add up further facilities to the town
Nowadays, people use a main road in middle of town but in future it would demolished and is going converted to pedestrians,however there is a plan to build a dual carriage road around city , the most noticable changes is going to occur in north of town by removing rural areas and shops and replacing it by roads and facilities such as bus station , car park,shopping centre and new residential property , in other hand as planned future map shows south of city is going to remain similar to nowdays , although there is going to be small changes including converting park to smaller area and building new houses.By contrasting maps only schoolband houses wich is located in south of islip town will remain fairly unchanged in future developments
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... in small town called Islip Overall , Islip town is going to witness dramatic...
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Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'demolish'
Suggestion: demolish
...n middle of town but in future it would demolished and is going converted to pedestrians,h...
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Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
...ed and is going converted to pedestrians,however there is a plan to build a dual carriag...
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Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o build a dual carriage road around city , the most noticable changes is going to ...
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Line 9, column 348, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...roads and facilities such as bus station , car park,shopping centre and new reside...
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Line 9, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , shopping
...acilities such as bus station , car park,shopping centre and new residential property , i...
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Line 9, column 404, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ping centre and new residential property , in other hand as planned future map sho...
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Line 9, column 500, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ty is going to remain similar to nowdays , although there is going to be small cha...
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Line 9, column 613, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...to smaller area and building new houses.By contrasting maps only schoolband houses...
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Line 9, column 746, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... fairly unchanged in future developments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0248447205 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87091015656 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 161.0 22.4926829268 716% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 809.0 112.824112599 717% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 161.0 22.9334400587 702% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 5.23603664747 477% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21047643859 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21047643859 0.103423049105 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169047195897 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599612624972 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 82.7 13.2329268293 625% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -83.48 61.2550243902 -136% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 64.9 10.3012195122 630% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.02 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.64 8.06136585366 194% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 11.4329268293 490% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 66.4 10.9970731707 604% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 11.0658536585 506% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.