the maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following maps provides some information about various developments that will take place in the center of a small town which is called Islip.
As can be clearly observed from the maps, the center of Islip will experience many different modifications, the most significant of which will occur in Main road where it will be allocated to pedestrians only. In addition, the row of shops at the north of Main road will disappear and replace by such infrastructures as bus station, car park, and a shopping center, while a series of shops that are located at south of Main road will remain unchanged.
Moreover, construction of a dual carriageway is another important improvement of the Islip town center. Whereas the site of school seemingly will be fixed at the southern part of the center, the park shall become smaller and new housing will be designed at the west of the park.
It is clear from the maps that unlike the current situation of town center, all facilities of the Islip town center will be surrounded by the dual carriageway like a ring.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'provide'.
Suggestion: provide
The following maps provides some information about various developm...
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Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ps, the center of Islip will experience many different modifications, the most significant of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77235237455 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565934065934 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.9788459249 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.833333333 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177294862385 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111493553703 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775070422734 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139581657425 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747430871832 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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