The maps below show the centre os a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for it's development.
The current situation and future plans for the centre of a small town known as Islip is depicts through two maps.
A quick glance at both the maps is quite enough to make it clear that the marvellous alteration will seen in upcoming time period in Islip town centre. However, park will surprisingly reduce in size.
In the current map of heart of the Islip town, main road is going from west to east between the shops. Countryside and housing are just above and under these outlets respectively. The southwest and southeast part of the map is taken by school and park.
In comparison, with the present Islip town centre, the future Islip town centre will be completely modernise with the latest amenities. Dual carriageway will be surround the centre of a small town. Main road will be converted into pedestrains. Bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing will be introduced instead of countryside and shops that is locates above the main road. Housing will be flourished from west to east also. On the other hand, park will be reduce . There will be no difference in the design of future school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
...ear that the marvellous alteration will seen in upcoming time period in Islip town c...
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Line 7, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roduced instead of countryside and shops that is locates above the main road. Hou...
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Line 7, column 435, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ng will be flourished from west to east also. On the other hand, park will be reduce...
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Line 7, column 479, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
.... On the other hand, park will be reduce . There will be no difference in the desi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77720207254 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48941323078 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569948186528 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4290632127 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9230769231 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178604737694 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686478377886 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087593630456 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139814181147 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787410356081 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.