The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development
The map gives information about the Islip town center at now and its development’s forecast in the subsequent years.
Overall, the appearance of a dual carriageway around the town separates the main road into one road for only pedestrians and one for other vehicles. The Islip town is modernized by a number of entertainment locations.
In the future, while the place for school remains unchanged, the countryside is demolished to make space for the dual carriageway. The park will be predicted to downsize so that more new houses can be built within the ring road.
Currently, there are two rows of shops along the main road. However, the shops along the south side of the street will remain while the row of shops in the north will be planned to knock down and make way for a bus station, a shopping center, a car park, and new housing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7027027027 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71769490475 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9753337983 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193731145508 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910277349788 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918886254875 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1300127538 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09927956919 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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