The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two map show center of a small town named Islip in the current time and projection for improvement in the future.
In general, town in the future will be much more modernized and provided with new facilities to compare with the town in present time, mainly in the north parts of the town.
In the current map, there are few amenities and buildings and whole north part of the town is covered by countryside. There is a straight road passing between shops located on both sides through which it is accessible to go to school located in the south west and to park sited in the south east of the town. Many houses are situated between the path directing to school and parking area in the east.
Moving on to the second map, town will be circled around by dual carriageway that will have path to the town on the east side of the map. The school will be expanded slightly, whilst the park will be diminished. New housing area will be constructed near the park and shops in the north will be cleared out in order to make room for new buildings such as, bus station, shopping center, car park and new housing area from west to east of the town. The previous site of main road adjacent to the shops will be converted into a pedestrian area in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41630901288 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27642656909 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49356223176 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4997136303 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12175987858 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618515536994 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604734825956 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101005480716 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061582842755 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.