The two maps illustrate the status of Islip town centre now and how town centre will be seen after development. Basically, the first map illustrate the current, while the second map illustrate the predicted future after development is done.
It is clear that most obvious change are done to the Main Road. Normally the road is running through west to east, and it is located in the north of town, but after development, instead of main road, a ring road is planned to construct. Various other developmets like opening new shows, establishing new housing will accompany the building of this ring road.
Currently, there are shops along both side of the main road. On the other hand, school is located in the south-west, while the park is located in the south-east. Both of these structures are connected to the main road by side roads. There is a huge place for housing in the south.
With the development, new facilities like Bus station, Shopping Center and Car park are planned to build. The shops that are normally located on the north zone will be replaced with these new facilities, while the shops that are located on the contrast side will be maintained for the future. Park space will be decreased to open new areas for housing. School will be at the same place. The main road will be converted to pedestrian road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... is located in the south-west, while the park is located in the south-east. Both ...
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Suggestion:
...d will be converted to pedestrian road.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so, while, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76623376623 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51845384535 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493506493506 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1847116098 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6428571429 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129309571894 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510407983355 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583872368987 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088013880865 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555109999707 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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