Given are two maps delineating transformation of an Art center during a period of 12 years, commencing from 2010.
Perceptibly, the region has experienced drastic modifications with the addition of myrial facilities in the south of the map, and
When it comes to the map in 2010, There was a road running from the west to the east in the north of the map connected with the open air car park That stayed to the south of the art center. Followed by the theater with 200 seats was in the west of the map, it covered the cafe inside and the cafe stayed in the corner of the south-east. The was a cinema in th eas and it was beside the theater. In addition, there were art galleries in the south-east of the map.
This year, the old road is still there and there is a new road from north to the south, it links the old road with the new position of the art Gallery in the center that is a replacement for old the cinema. The theater is still there and likely smaller than last one, however, the seats of the theater insert more with 100 chairs. In the interim the cafe is removal extended from the theater to the and of the art gallery on the south. Finally there are three new cinema screens appears in the the south of the map.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... facilities in the south of the map, and When it comes to the map in 2010, There ...
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...the south of the art center. Followed by the theater with 200 seats was in the we...
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Suggestion: Finally,
...he and of the art gallery on the south. Finally there are three new cinema screens appe...
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Suggestion: the
...are three new cinema screens appears in the the south of the map.
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Suggestion: the; the
...are three new cinema screens appears in the the south of the map.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, still, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22978723404 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31387649745 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451063829787 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.3252162855 43.030603864 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.444444444 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195903679404 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943017305922 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818318390889 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138195379411 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079244991745 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.55 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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