The two maps illustrate the evolutions that occured in a resort nearby seaside of Templeton, from 1990 and 2005.
Overall, we can readily apparent that many of the amenities are added at the bottom row of the map.
Moving in a clockwise direction from the eastern part of the area, we can see that there were a few trees and a pound which remained the same. A school and a hospital in the north-eastern part of the map also remained unchanged.
On the developed resort, a house behind the lake and the trees beside the lake turned into multi-complexes; in addition, an airport was added along the school. A railway track at the right side of the map was extented towards the left. the area near to the railway station in 1990 was quite spare with just 5 trees and two houses which were transformed into a factory. The plants and accomadations beside a road changed into a suppermarket. Moreover additional complexes were built near a new rail way track.
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- The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and a pound which remained the same. A school and a hospital in the north-easte...
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Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...A railway track at the right side of the map was extented towards the left. the a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...the map was extented towards the left. the area near to the railway station in 199...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ide a road changed into a suppermarket. Moreover additional complexes were built near a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66470588235 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70184481381 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4481741015 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1111111111 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169387779777 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718641387995 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875999925798 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123006180684 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107159202148 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.