The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.
The diagrams give information about how an electrical generator dam changed the appearance of a town over a period of twenty years, starting from 1990.
Overall, it is clear that the town transform from a agriculture-based area into a commerce-based one with little involvement of green spaces. In addition, some industrial services were introduced to the town.
Regarding the agricultural places, along the river, irrigated farmlands and areas used for rare flora and fauna were destroyed to make way for villages, which were relocated from the Middle East of the town and electrical facilities. Moreover, in the Northern part, there was a replacement of woodlands and the ancient structure of the old town with a big reservoir. Situating near the reservoir, a hotel was constructed to provide accommodation service.
In the other parts of the town, the two mountains in the North remained unchanged over the period. In contrast, the two other in the South disappeared to make room for development. Finally, the river varied significantly due to a hydroelectric dam diving it into two separate parts with the Northern part is a man-made lake and the Southern one is the same as it was in 1990.
- The table below shows the average weekly salaries of men and of women working in different occupations 84
- Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause What could be done to encourage people to buy local products The abundant financial resources of big 56
- The bar chart shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011 The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one person households 89
- The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t is clear that the town transform from a agriculture-based area into a commerce-...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...yed to make way for villages, which were relocated from the Middle East of the to...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, regarding, so, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12182741117 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10843978507 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598984771574 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5211303744 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136260495928 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534352105467 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318184154492 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814652873319 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248380256527 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.