This report derives from two pictorials illustrating the current layout of a commercial area at the east of Norbiton and its renovation plan.
Generally speaking, the plan of redevelopment aims to turn the industrial section into a residential neighborhood with the construction of various supporting facilities.
In the north side of the renovation plan, a road along with a housing is to be built which will move the countryside far east. This north road is expected to pass through a bridge to join with the central roundabout while another highway from northeast is also to be connected expanding its openings from two to four. The plans to orient the eastern road towards a new school with latest residents is to be established on the both of this road. The northwestern highway is also oriented toward latest dwellings as well as other homes are also to be constructed beside it.
In the junction of the main road at the south, a new traffic circle is to be constructed. A medical center and shops beside the both traffic circle are to established.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...t the eastern road towards a new school with latest residents is to be established on the b...
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Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'toward the latest'.
Suggestion: toward the latest
...e northwestern highway is also oriented toward latest dwellings as well as other homes are al...
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Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: TO_TOO[4]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...hops beside the both traffic circle are to established.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91111111111 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92465044867 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9606922128 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737002627361 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340310565446 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416107406613 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561312828036 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459674731643 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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