The maps below show the layouts of the nature Museum between 2010 and 2013.
The two maps illustrate the arrangements of nature museum between the year 2010 and 2013.
Overall, the museum had undergone striking renovations, with the most prominent being the clearance of the garden to make space for the expansion of the building.
In 2010, there was a big garden covered almost a half of the area on the left of the map. Starting from the main entrance, visitors would step into the main lobby where the ticket desk was located on the left-front of the entrance. The Ocean Hall, which was connected with the lobby by a door, situated to the back of the museum. There was a Dinosaurs exhibition to the left of the lobby next , and a Mammals area on the top right of the map.
In 2013, the big garden had been chopped down to make way for a number of accommodations including a shop on the right-front of the entrance and a cafe to the right of it. The Mammals area was relocated on the top left of the map, and a Human Origins Display had been established between the Mammals and the new cafe. The Ocean Hall had been expanded to as big as the width of the lobby. The Ice Age display, where it used to be the Mammals exhibition, had been built and extended with a small Insect display to the bottom left corner of it, whereas the dinosaurs still remained intact.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...exhibition to the left of the lobby next , and a Mammals area on the top right of ...
^^
Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mmals area on the top right of the map. In 2013, the big garden had been chopped...
^^^
Line 4, column 389, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed to as big as the width of the lobby. The Ice Age display, where it used to be th...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
still, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42016806723 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44914665897 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495798319328 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1224376129 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1653691218 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856669721859 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131915949884 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160884313532 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176787371297 0.0819641961636 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...exhibition to the left of the lobby next , and a Mammals area on the top right of ...
^^
Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mmals area on the top right of the map. In 2013, the big garden had been chopped...
^^^
Line 4, column 389, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed to as big as the width of the lobby. The Ice Age display, where it used to be th...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
still, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42016806723 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44914665897 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495798319328 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1224376129 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1653691218 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856669721859 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131915949884 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160884313532 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176787371297 0.0819641961636 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.