The maps below show the village of stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram chart reveals that information about representation the rural area in 1930 and 2010.It give two years
To sum up, the salient feature seems that in 1930 adolescent most used the farmland.Thus,
shops and gardens nearbyreduced related to farmland in 1930 but also have person used large house.
On the flip side, in 1930 and 2010 was not be changed.For example,
river stoke,post office,key houses,primary school and bridge.However,in 1930 large house replaced in 2010 retirement home.The gardens had been climbed in 2010 .Hence ,the built upsurge
rather that shops bomb in 2010.Thus,gardens did not
rose in 2010 because there have plethora new department built in 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, thus, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 594.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 108.0 196.424390244 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.22370979547 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17979733806 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703703703704 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 162.9 283.868780488 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 22.4926829268 240% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.0 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 297.0 112.824112599 263% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.0 22.9334400587 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.5 5.23603664747 563% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138866034219 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106723825718 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0112693262337 0.0843802449381 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065644328154 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239458520908 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.5 13.2329268293 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.13 61.2550243902 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.3012195122 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.06136585366 129% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.9970731707 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.0658536585 217% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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