The maps give information about a university sports court

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The maps give information about a university sports court.

Given are two maps depicting the modifications of an undetermined university sports centre during a given period, from 1990 to date.

It is conspicuous that the layout of the court is more likely to undergo some significant changes with the addition of numerous amenities which make it more convenient and modernised for humans.

On the left-hand side of the centre, in 1990, there was a big park and a car park. However, over 30 years later, the former was knocked down to give space for a basketball court and the latter was converted into a tennis court.

On the right-hand side of the court, one apparent change is the section surrounded by a barrier at the moment; as a result, the outdoor pool was transformed to an indoor pool. Besides, the fitness centre was erected to replace the tennis court. It had a slight swing about the location of the changing room which moved from next to the receptionist to adjacent to the fitness centre. However, the café and the receptionist still remain at their location throughout the time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing a given period, from 1990 to date. It is conspicuous that the layout of the...
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Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h moved from next to the receptionist to adjacent to the fitness centre. However,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, still, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85474860335 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68884022204 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620111731844 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8970091415 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.625 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183658217016 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628362116355 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538026555078 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094724435896 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425141733977 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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