The maps give information about a university sports court

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The maps give information about a university sports court.

Given are the two maps delineating the transformation of a university sport court during a period of time commencing from 1990 to this year.
Perceptibly, the area experienced drastic modification with the elimination of park and car park, as well as the addition of myriad facilities such as more tennis court and fitness center.
The north west of the maps there is a park in 1990, which was replaced by basketball court in this year. while total area in the east including cafe, reception, outdoor pool, changing room and tennis court covered by wall. In the north east, the pool was outdoor in 1990 and in now the pool is indoor, it is no relocation. In the south of reception, the changing room was removed to the east. However, the tennis court had constructed 2 more quantities than that in 1990. The south west, there was a car park in 1990, that is converted tennis place at the moment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two maps delineating the transforma...
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Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...on of a university sport court during a period of time commencing from 1990 to this year. Per...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...laced by basketball court in this year. while total area in the east including cafe, ...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reception, the changing room was removed to the east. However, the tennis court h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64779874214 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65803456325 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6526208714 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.375 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143831281192 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660747785867 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773928191469 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119384643758 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870914194453 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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