The pictures illustrate the renovation plan of an industrial area in Norbiton town. Overall, the site is planned to become the residential areas for people with more hoising and facilities which better living standard.
The first factor to be mentioned is the replacement of all factories into the construction of housing site while the turnaround on the centre will be remained. Moreover, on the other side of the rive where farmland is, large space of houses is planned to be erected as well as a bridge over the river is going to be built for more convenient traffic with a road connecting directly between that and the biggest turnaround.
In the south of the turnaround, there is a smaller one and the construction of shops and medical centre, which meet the demand for shopping and healthcare activities of the resident. Besides, playground and a school are going to be built in the west of the central turnaround modernizing and facilitating space for kids’ education and entertainment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...emained. Moreover, on the other side of the rive where farmland is, large space of house...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, moreover, so, well, while, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04819277108 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93911705414 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8939287449 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.666666667 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.23603664747 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211564588352 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120113425731 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120200453882 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161457500195 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147052459733 0.0819641961636 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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