Modern children are suffering from those diseases, which were once considered to be meant for the adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevelent among the children. What are it is causes and remedies.
The given column chart illustrates the information regarding the birth rate of some crucial countries such as Sweden Germany, England, New Zealand, India, and China. The data is calibrated in numbers per thousands.
Overall, it is evident that the birth rate per thousand the lowest regions are Sweden Germany and England. However, China and India have the highest number of birth rate per thousand.
Having a quick glance it is apparent that the birth rate per thousand is the lowest in Sweden (15), Germany (16) and England 20. However, China has 40 number per thousand in birth rate which is the highest in the country than any other region. The second highest populated country is India that have 33 birth rate.
Moving towards the rest of the information is that the third highest populated region is New Zealand that has a double number per thousand than Sweden's country. The country who have slightly incline in number than the New Zealand that is India. Respectively, China has a double birth rate than England and triple than that of Sweden and Germany.
- A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correectly.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the mordern world.Do you think that be 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australia men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods exported to several countries between 1975 and 2010 by different modes of transport Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 87
- Some people with good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work. Why do you think that is? What problems does this cause? 73
- Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world, unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.To what extent do you agree or disagree ? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d is the lowest in Sweden 15, Germany 16 and England 20. However, China has 40 nu...
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Line 13, column 192, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'inclined'.
Suggestion: inclined
... country. The country who have slightly incline in number than the New Zealand that is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, second, so, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 10.0 33.7804878049 30% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98333333333 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37644692766 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9304884464 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00489403864032 0.215688989381 2% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0026318377984 0.103423049105 3% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00789551339521 0.0843802449381 9% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00322163637498 0.15604864568 2% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00558003788498 0.0819641961636 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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