Modern technology has a great impact on our environment. Some say that people should adopt a simple lifestyle to solve this problem, while others argue that the technology itself should provide a solution. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Though the out most scientific development make our life easier, the impacts on geo livelihood are enormous. The people are getting the idea of modifying their lifestyle, on the other hand, people of different ideology thinking to solve the problem using the technology itself. There is a decision to make whether the human or the technology infrastructure can eradicate this with a better solution.
In the era of the modern technological revolution, people from different region choosing a simpler day to day life. Taking the geological situation as a great path of a healthy life, the forest area those are taken down for the development of power sources are being re-captured. Not only human but also the numerous creatures that depend on this forest side can have a better living condition. A great deal of modern technology depends on wave-based development which is causing the development of the human mind as well as other creatures to communicate. By dropping the harmful wave based materials can help us to prevent the environment we live in.
As seen from various research that this scientific development can eradicate its own cause of distraction. By colonizing the area from for different species the most part of damage can be solved. The government is putting more fund in that particular manner to improve a better geological condition for all living creatures and this research is now putting the human as well as other livelihoods to a modernized healthy environment. Dropping the negative effect of technology-based energy source and developing a new way of transferring the wave energy ( mainly internet) to a less harmful path.
Since the technology took a lot more step to break down our idea of communication and as well as health, it can also be used as a solution to this upcoming problem. It is our concern to put all the effort to develop a more humanly environment for our next generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...prevent the environment we live in. As seen from various research that this sc...
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... new way of transferring the wave energy mainly internet to a less harmful path. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 3.97073170732 453% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 965.302439024 167% => OK
No of words: 320.0 196.424390244 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.025 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98113207314 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528125 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 283.868780488 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3812474797 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181134664238 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652821846054 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050890520571 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124246590575 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498768591479 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 40.7170731707 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.