Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it cost.
How true is this statement.
There are two parts , whether the statement is true or not and influence people.
Also need to discuss what influence people.
IELTS writing task.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Stephanie Kaushal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s this statement. There are two parts , whether the statement is true or not an...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...is true or not and influence people. Also need to discuss what influence people. ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 33.7804878049 9% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 246.0 965.302439024 25% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 49.0 196.424390244 25% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02040816327 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.64575131106 3.73543355544 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25388553392 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 42.0 106.607317073 39% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.857142857143 0.547539520022 157% => OK
syllable_count: 67.5 283.868780488 24% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 8.0 22.4926829268 36% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.445020142 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 41.0 112.824112599 36% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.16666666667 22.9334400587 36% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.631936865119 0.215688989381 293% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.259068637518 0.103423049105 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.21046491271 0.0843802449381 249% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322520091479 0.15604864568 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.263903178366 0.0819641961636 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 13.2329268293 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.28 61.2550243902 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.1 10.3012195122 40% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 8.0 40.7170731707 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.0 11.4329268293 26% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 10.9970731707 47% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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