Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced They only care about how much it costs How true is this statement What influences people when they buy food

Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it cost.

How true is this statement.

There are two parts , whether the statement is true or not and influence people.

Also need to discuss what influence people.

IELTS writing task.

Votes
Average: 3.6 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s this statement. There are two parts , whether the statement is true or not an...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...is true or not and influence people. Also need to discuss what influence people. ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 33.7804878049 9% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 246.0 965.302439024 25% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 49.0 196.424390244 25% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02040816327 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.64575131106 3.73543355544 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25388553392 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 42.0 106.607317073 39% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.857142857143 0.547539520022 157% => OK
syllable_count: 67.5 283.868780488 24% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 8.0 22.4926829268 36% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.445020142 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 41.0 112.824112599 36% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.16666666667 22.9334400587 36% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.631936865119 0.215688989381 293% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.259068637518 0.103423049105 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.21046491271 0.0843802449381 249% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322520091479 0.15604864568 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.263903178366 0.0819641961636 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 13.2329268293 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.28 61.2550243902 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.1 10.3012195122 40% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 8.0 40.7170731707 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.0 11.4329268293 26% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 10.9970731707 47% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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